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SYSTEMWIDE | INFO ([personal profile] unplug) wrote 2015-02-25 01:40 am (UTC)

REVISIONS

Thank you for your application! We found your description of Dean as a person to be thorough, insightful, and accurate, particularly with regard to balancing his positive traits with his negative ones. We have a few elaborations we'd like you to make before we give approval.

▶ REVISIONS
  • Your Matrix section provides a link to an external page detailing the world Dean comes from. As per our requests on our application template, we actually require the world to be written out in full, optionally adding detail about how it works as a Matrix (such as the presence of Agents and such), and that canon characters can provide a link to an external page detailing their personal history.

    Please give us a description of Dean's Matrix. Feel free to collaborate with others who have already apped, but remember to make sure it is relevant to Dean. It does not have to be especially lengthy -- 200 words as a minimum will be recommended, and the use of bullet point type formats to organise information.

  • We would additionally like more elaboration surrounding Dean's anomalous capabilities. Some questions that spring to mind include: how are these spells performed? Does he require items, incantations, or gestures to do them? Are there limitations in place, such as how long they take? Do they cost him in any way to perform?
You have 72 hours to complete these changes. Please let us know via comment here or PM to [personal profile] unplug if you require more time.

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