Thank you for your application! We appreciate the complexity of the world your character comes from and your ability to streamline this information into an easily understood summary. We have just one change we'd like you to make or elaborate on before we give approval.

▶ REVISIONS

• In your personality section, you place some emphasis on the mental deterioration that Saphir undergoes which leads up to his extraction. In general, we approve of this decision and have no issue with the transition you have chosen.
  
  In your first sample, you list several symptoms he experiences, all of them severe. However, you also indicate that they do not impact his overall functioning, which might imply that they are less frequent than a sample allows you to represent. We understand that this inconsistency might seem negligible to many audiences, but given the importance of the human mind and psychology to the themes of the game, we are especially interested in clear representation.
  
  Therefore, we would like you to provide to us a couple of paragraphs elaborating on this aspect of his development, with details that demonstrate some realism/thought with regard to panic attacks and claustrophobia, and a projection about how you anticipate it will play out over the next few months or however long his recovery may be. We are available to provide some suggestions or guidance if you would like.

You have 72 hours to complete these changes. Please let us know via comment here or PM to unplug if you require more time.