Your application is now approved! Your samples especially provided a richly in character and delightful example of Dorian's voice and manner, and your description of his time spent unplugged paints a good picture of his adaptation thus far. To proceed, please reply with your character journal, and then:
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▶ NOTE
We would ask you to nix the note about his illusioning his clothing and having those abilities. We realise this may come across as pedantic, but we feel that the creation of these kinds of illusions it outside the established bounds of magic as presented in Dragon Age and sets a precedent for what mages can and can't do, with wider implications than just his clothing. While some canon supports the notion, there is canon that does not (cold environments, combat situations where armour is necessary, etc.).
If this is a problem, please do feel free to PM us to discuss! We are confident in the rest of your app to give approval either way.
APPROVED + NOTE
Your application is now approved! Your samples especially provided a richly in character and delightful example of Dorian's voice and manner, and your description of his time spent unplugged paints a good picture of his adaptation thus far. To proceed, please reply with your character journal, and then:
- join the following communities: our OOC community
systemwide, our logs community
systemcritical, our network community
subsystem, and optionally, our meme community,
jackin.
- comment to the Taken listing
- comment to the Player Contact listing
- visit our permanent CR Meme to drum up new CR or establish prior CR
- visit the Recruitment page, if you would like to join a crew now
- post to
systemwide with your character/player introduction if you wish.
Feel free to jump in!▶ NOTE
We would ask you to nix the note about his illusioning his clothing and having those abilities. We realise this may come across as pedantic, but we feel that the creation of these kinds of illusions it outside the established bounds of magic as presented in Dragon Age and sets a precedent for what mages can and can't do, with wider implications than just his clothing. While some canon supports the notion, there is canon that does not (cold environments, combat situations where armour is necessary, etc.).
If this is a problem, please do feel free to PM us to discuss! We are confident in the rest of your app to give approval either way.