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SYSTEMWIDE | INFO ([personal profile] unplug) wrote 2015-02-28 03:10 am (UTC)

APPROVED + NOTES

▶ WELCOME TO SYSTEMWIDE

Your application is now approved! Your love for the character came through along with good grasp of his flaws and vulnerabilities. To proceed, please reply with your character journal, and then:
  • join the following communities: our OOC community [community profile] systemwide, our logs community [community profile] systemcritical, our network community [community profile] subsystem, and optionally, our meme community, [community profile] jackin.
  • comment to the Taken listing
  • comment to the Player Contact listing
  • visit our permanent CR Meme to drum up new CR or establish prior CR
  • visit the Recruitment page, if you would like to join a crew now
  • comment to [community profile] systemwide with your character/player introduction if you wish.
Role play will begin on March 1. Until then, we encourage you to participate in the CR meme, and continue to check out our current test drive for new prospective players or field test some interactions before game start.

▶ NOTES

  • In the future, if you choose to app other characters at Systemwide, we would appreciate it if you could link your character's history to an external link and focus on setting, or otherwise condense it down. We found your summary coherent and insightful, hence the approval, but we would like to stick to our conventions of conciseness for personal histories as much as possible!

  • As you've written it, we are fine with your depictions and descriptions of John's psychological problems, and note that inaccuracies are quoted by a character in the show (his psychiatrist) rather than being your interpretation. A few symptoms like nightmares and sadness without classing them as full-on disorder would be fine for characterization, but we'd like you to exercise caution with those labels.

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