Unfortunately, at this time, we will not be able to approve your application. Although we have not explicitly stated as such in our rules, we feel that the depicted power of Mayn Zalik would present a harsh game-imbalance in the Real that we would find difficult to resolve. As it stands, his inherent qualities are too powerful for Systemwide. Quite simply, he would break the metaplot and end the game prematurely.
We also feel that your samples did not allow for a broad range of his personality to be captured. However, as there are other unresolvable issues as described above, we won't be asking for revisions.
Thank you again for your interest in Systemwide, and we hope that you will be able to take these notes and try us again with a more appropriate character. If you want to discuss with us in more detail about any aspect of this decline, please feel free to PM our mod account at unplug.
DENIED
Thank you for your application!
Unfortunately, at this time, we will not be able to approve your application. Although we have not explicitly stated as such in our rules, we feel that the depicted power of Mayn Zalik would present a harsh game-imbalance in the Real that we would find difficult to resolve. As it stands, his inherent qualities are too powerful for Systemwide. Quite simply, he would break the metaplot and end the game prematurely.
We also feel that your samples did not allow for a broad range of his personality to be captured. However, as there are other unresolvable issues as described above, we won't be asking for revisions.
Thank you again for your interest in Systemwide, and we hope that you will be able to take these notes and try us again with a more appropriate character. If you want to discuss with us in more detail about any aspect of this decline, please feel free to PM our mod account at