Thank you for your application! We were delighted with your interest in integrating your thoroughly complex understanding of Marvel canon with the reality (and Reality) of the Matrix, such as focusing on the initial unplugging transition and Skye’s attitudes. We have just one change we'd like you to make before we give approval.
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In her Personality section, you note that:
’On the whole, Skye makes a terrible agent because she's brash, impulsive, and prioritizes her own judiciousness over the work of the agency. This means taking enormous risks and disregarding rules, but it also means connecting to people in a way that a bureaucratic giant might fail to.’
Although we realize that we may be overstating the significance of these lines given the context of the surrounding text, we question the indication that Skye is wholly incompetent and unable to control herself emotionally in capacity as an agent. Her canon point explicitly takes place after multiple demonstrations that her heart rate (i.e., with the actual use of a monitoring device) and emotional calm are well within “professional limits” during high-stress situations, even though she does turn out to have her breaking points.
If you would not mind adding a couple lines or simply responding to this comment, we would appreciate a clarification or qualification of your description of her “terrible” performance!
You have 72 hours to complete these changes. Please let us know via comment here or PM to unplug if you require more time.
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