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SYSTEMWIDE | INFO ([personal profile] unplug) wrote 2015-03-27 02:42 am (UTC)

REVISIONS

Thank you for your application! We are always a huge fan of your passion for this character and canon, which comes through in your thoughtful interpretations of his personality and history. We have an elaboration we'd like you to make before we give approval.

▶ REVISIONS
  • Luke's personality section leans toward his positive traits (selflessness, leadership, etc.). We see that you noted he is a little stubborn, impulsive, and sensitive, but these are brief mentions and it is difficult to see how this would create actual problems and dynamic conflict in-game. We would like to see a short paragraph expanding on these personality weaknesses or drawbacks. We would like to recommend writing this with RPable scenarios in mind.

Please provide a brief elaboration on Luke's personality as described above. You have 72 hours to complete these changes. Please let us know via comment here or PM to [personal profile] unplug if you require more time.

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